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Commission: Nimbus Mech by templar127 Commission: Nimbus Mech by templar127
    The cockpit was cold, dark, and empty. Much like the silent eternal night of Nightmare Moon, it breathed no life, no soul, and would only bring about darkness. Its cool, metallic, grey skin was often seen as something risen from the dead, and yet, it only sleeps. It would not care about the outside world, no family to visit, love and cherish with, no friends to talk to or to go to. All that mattered to it...was it's sleep, a sleeping giant that didn't want to be disturbed.

    The lights of the vast corridor lit, revealing a light-blue pegasus standing in front of the giant. He gazed at its towering height, its enormous arms, and its powerful legs, sometimes he would tilt his head just to get a better angle at it. In a swift movement, he grabbed a ladder and proceeded towards it. He climbed on top of its hulking head, looking at it eye-to-eye like what Fluttershy would do when facing down a dragon. This pegasus was not afraid of it. He did not want to show the weakness of smallness. He then placed his hoof on its face, as if he was communicating with it. He felt deep sympathy and eventually deep care with it, more often like a father-son bond rather than David and Goliath. The pegasus then opened its front canopy, revealing its heart. Cold. Dark. And Empty. He then sat on the cockpit and closed the canopy. Afterwards, he wore his HUD unit around his head, placed a hoof on the control stick and began to flick its internal switches, eventually waking the metallic beast. All of a sudden, the giant didn't anger about its sleep. Instead it felt warmth determination. It had never felt so alive after a thousand moons, as if it was given a second chance to go out to the world and start living. It finally knew that it had a heart that would keep it alive. But what did the heart respond?

    As Nimbus brought his Mark VI XOS Suit to life, he can only put on a cocky smirk signifying another ingenious creation made by an ingenious builder.

This work is made by my good friend :iconjorelski18: Very amazing work! :D

And yes, I'll be putting this on my Fanfic eventually that's still ongoing.

Anyways, hope you like it! And thanks for making this man ;)

Link to my fic:……
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TheDoubleDeuced Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
templar127 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2016
Thx! :D
jorelski18 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2016  Student General Artist
damn, you're good at making stories, read your fanfiction and i think it should have more recognition!
templar127 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2016
Thank you! I just wish I have time to make more though or I don't contract Writer's Block :(
jorelski18 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2016  Student General Artist
yeah, unless you RP with someone, add some new characters that will contribute to the plot more
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